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guitar string snare

June 12, 2017 // 0 Comments

i only ever found one alive, screaming, flopping, choking, fur run red with cut up blood, fresh from the sliced meat.rabbit stew. rabbit soup. rabbit in a crockpot, just add [...]

Sow What

June 9, 2017 // 0 Comments

I kinda like this poem and would not change a thing.  Sometimes they just come together perfect. Part of the inspiration for this was a course my worker and I took on lawn [...]

Garden Planning Time

June 8, 2017 // 0 Comments

I am doing a landscape design. Freehand sketches, sans computer.  It is scanty looking just as it should be. It is metaphors, inspiration and shade not yet come. To help the [...]

Pretty Random

June 6, 2017 // 0 Comments

His Hot Wheels were set up just so.  One day like a colour wheel, the next day by size or speed or purpose.  Being a good father I noticed, pondered the categories and [...]

Five Sevenths

June 6, 2017 // 0 Comments

There is of course a lead up to this poem.  The scars come from someplace. What was it that inspired it amd who is the enemy?  Yes it is tempting to tell you but then it [...]

Disturbed Placid

June 5, 2017 // 0 Comments

In the narrows seven slipped from hands onto rocks and under feet; eddies and spray as loved ones push back desperate again for capillary. The river swells surging over the [...]

Garden Sketches

May 30, 2017 // 0 Comments

I am doing a landscape design. Freehand sketches, sans computer.  It is scanty looking just as it should be. It is metaphors, inspiration and shade not yet come.  To help [...]

Under the Radar

May 22, 2017 // 0 Comments

Gray Painted Gold Weak words in cliches stride out of sync with slap stick trips and falls. Butchered words; the hide stripped the blood drained the meat criss crossed on the [...]

So Ponderous

May 19, 2017 // 0 Comments

I bought new reeds. Metamorphic, Sedimentary, Cumulus, Phragmites and old works by Igneous. Yesterday I tuned babble. So ponderous; trickling, cascading and bubbly; changing [...]